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      Hello classmates! I want you to help me with my written assingments. I would like you to read my post called The Happy Paws Organization to see if there are any mistakes in my grammar and the structure of my post. Thank you guys very much and have a great day!

 


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Angelica
09/24/2013 11:51am

I think was clean I like that you change the color of what you want us to pay more attention.

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Frances
09/24/2013 12:18pm

You're piece is very well organized, informed, and definitely puts the reader to think about animal cruelty. But regarding some grammatical errors, you need to work with the verb tenses, because sometimes in a same sentence you would write two kind of verb tenses. But other than that it was a very good piece.

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